Assessment for a personal description

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General

  • Does the description have a title?
  • Is the description at least 100 words long?
  • Does it have 4 paragraphs?

First paragraph: Introduction ==

  • Has the person been generally introduced?
  • Has the author justified why he has chosen this person?
  • Does the paragraph include some linkers, to make the sentences longer?
  • Are the first and last sentences good (Think of the Sandwich theory)?

Second paragraph: Physical description

  • Has the person been physically described?
  • Does the paragraph include three "cool" adjectives?
  • Does the paragraph include some linkers, to make the sentences longer?
  • Are the first and last sentences good (Think of the Sandwich theory)?

Third paragraph: Character

  • Has the person's character been described?
  • Does the paragraph include three "cool" adjectives?
  • Does the paragraph include some linkers, to make the sentences longer?
  • Are the first and last sentences good (Think of the Sandwich theory)?

Final paragraph

  • Does the author conclude by saying why he admires this person?
  • Does the author connect to his personal experience?
  • Is what he says fully justified by the previous