Assessment for a personal description

General

• Does the description have a title?
• Is the description at least 100 words long?
• Does it have 4 paragraphs?

First paragraph: Introduction ==

• Has the person been generally introduced?
• Has the author justified why he has chosen this person?
• Does the paragraph include some linkers, to make the sentences longer?
• Are the first and last sentences good (Think of the Sandwich theory)?

Second paragraph: Physical description

• Has the person been physically described?
• Does the paragraph include three "cool" adjectives?
• Does the paragraph include some linkers, to make the sentences longer?
• Are the first and last sentences good (Think of the Sandwich theory)?

Third paragraph: Character

• Has the person's character been described?
• Does the paragraph include three "cool" adjectives?
• Does the paragraph include some linkers, to make the sentences longer?
• Are the first and last sentences good (Think of the Sandwich theory)?

Final paragraph

• Does the author conclude by saying why he admires this person?
• Does the author connect to his personal experience?
• Is what he says fully justified by the previous