A Description of Someone you Admire

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Write a description of a person you admire.

By South Africa The Good News / www.sagoodnews.co.za, CC BY 2.0, https://commons.wikimedia.org/w/index.php?curid=9747318

Consider:

  • Who are you going to write about?
  • Why?
  • What traits of his/her personality and/or appearance do you admire?
  • How has this person influenced you?

Planning:

Paragraph 1

  • Introduce the person and provide basic details. You may explain why you are writing about them, in a general way.

Paragraph 2

  • Describe their physical appearance. Think of at least three "cool" adjectives.
  • Mention aspects of their personality that are relevant, and prove your point providing examples of their actions. Think of at least three "cool" adjectives.

Paragraph 3

  • Important achievements
  • Interests
  • Lifestyle

Paragraph 4

  • Wrap up the description providing a summary. Do not forget a personal comment about him or her.

Revision

  • Check your spelling, paragraphing and punctuation.
  • Make sure you have used plenty of adjectives.
  • Have you explained how and why this person has influenced you?
  • It would be nice if you included a picture.

Checklist for a personal description